高考英语写作满分句型养成

满分句型养成

问题1.如何让表达更具体、更具有画面感 Specific

方法： 用状语从句，为事情的发生铺垫背景

(1)When I arrived at Wander Theme Park（万达乐园）,I felt quiet hungry.

(提供时间背景)

(2)If you take a ride in Wheel of Flames(风火飞轮),you can feel extremely free.

(提供条件背景)

(3)I chose to take Rig Hazard(钻塔急坠),so that I could take a birds-eye view of the theme park.

(提供目的背景)

(4) I recommend watching the play in Feishui Theatre (淝水剧场)，because it offers grand scerce.

(提供原因背景)

(5) Although Mountain Spiash(急流勇进) is a popular project, it can make our bodies wet through.

(提供递进背景)

方法：用定语从句让主句中的人物、事物、时间、地点形象更饱满，描述更精确

问题2：如何让表达更有机、更有容量？Organic

答：用名词性从句，非谓语，省略句

(1)What I experienced in the park has left a deep impression on my mind.

(2)I believe that the project Big wheel(摩天轮) is most amusing.

(3) I love the project called Soaring with Dragon.(白龙飞天)

◎ Riding Soaring with Dragon supplies me a feeling of flying.

◎ To entertain myself, I took a ride on Anhui in the Air.(飞越安徽)

(4) While (I was) taking photos, I found that the battery of my iphone lost its power.

问题3：如何让表达更地道 Idiomatic

1)用固定短语表达从句：

2)用感叹句

How exciting it is to overlook the theme park!

What a grand (壮观的)scene it is!

3)用如此…以致”句

The packed lunch was so expensive that I coundn´t afford it!

4)用强调句型

It was you that comforted me to calm down